FFfAW #178 – What ya say?

It’s just across the bay. Noticing he probably wasn’t heard, repeated: It’s just across the bay.

What ya say?

Across the bay! (A bit louder and pointing towards the ferry.)

What ya say? The old man held up his hand, cupping his ear to better hear the young man’s response.

Having less patience than an ordinary soul, the young man leaned further toward the old man.

IT’S JUST ACROSS THE BAY!

Well! You don’t have to yell, young whippersnapper!

I didn’t mean to yell. I just wanted you to be able to hear me. The ferry you need is just across the bay right now, but it will be back in twenty minutes.

What ya say?

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