Looking out today
The fog is covering it all
Shall we hide ourselves
Think that would change anything
Better to seek the sunshine.
Colleen’s Weekly #Tanka #Poetry Challenge #21 – “Fog & Change”
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Looking out today
The fog is covering it all
Shall we hide ourselves
Think that would change anything
Better to seek the sunshine.
Colleen’s Weekly #Tanka #Poetry Challenge #21 – “Fog & Change”
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Well done! I like the positive twist you put at the end. ❤
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Thank you.
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I awoke to thick fog this morning too — I live about 5 miles in from the sea in So Cal. It’s a little spooky when it’s that thick!
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It’s rarely foggy here but dangerous when it is.
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