Bussokusekika Poetry – a pattern of 5-7-5-7-7-7
A tanka poem with an extra phrase of seven added on at the end.
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Winter beauty seen
Frost winds howling in the night
Their voices demand
Snow covered branches bending
To uncompromising winds
Releasing snowy star flakes.
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I can’t wait for snow!!! Loved the poem rugby!
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So cold, yet beautiful as well. “snowy star flakes” is wonderful!
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Such lovely imagery: “…Snow-covered branches bending, To uncompromising winds, Releasing snowy star flakes.”
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Thank you
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You’re so welcome. ❤️
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