My grandkids were talking of creation
Arguing, discussing how such a nation
Could happen, they both had their notions
Of how people and land, even oceans
Were started and I just listened to hear what they thought
Of course the church school student was taught
About Adam and Eve and how it began
The older one tried to speak of the Big Bang
Interesting listening to these kids under twenty
Of how the world started with ideas aplenty.
It’s a marvelous thing, the ideas of youth
I am quiet, trying not to appear uncouth.
I think all the answers about creation
Might prove both of them right,
Oh, the devastation!
Such a moving poem, way to work that poetry in a unique way. Would love to hear your thoughts on our new short at our blog Gastradamus called rutjob
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I read it, I’m sorry you hate it so. Getting no sleep at night is a pita for sure. I’m glad you have your mom to help. Maybe a change of jobs is possible? Good luck in whatever you decide. For now, get some sleep!
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Thanks for the feedback buddy, be sure to leave a comment. Rutjob is gaining momentum. Thanks for the feedback
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