I’m going to miss him😌
Tanka Tuesday
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- Write a syllabic poem on the theme of something that brought a big change in your life, using a syllabic form from the forms list HERE. If you write a freestyle poem, you must include a syllabic form with it.
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Senryu – generally consist of 17 syllables divided over three lines in a 5-7-5 pattern, dealing with human nature, no capitals)
getting cancer twice
twenty years apart surprise
living on in health
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#Tanka Tuesday Poetry Challenge, Specific Theme, 10/8/2024
Red

But it’s the red I would choose
Golden orbs muted bright
Red autumn leaves take my sight.
Moonwashed Weekly Prompt – Writer’s Choice*
dVerse Poets



It wasn’t in the least remote
Fortifying his response
Cigarettes and whiskey long
Even then he felt no shame
Putting her writing to the flame
Detective work can make you queasy
Falling for the guilty isn’t easy
Tried his best to not get involved
When it was done, and the crime solved
He found himself in his favorite bar
Where playing the blues was the star.
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Poetics: Inspired by Album Cover Art
Fandango’s Story Starter
This week’s Story Starter teaser is:
As Paul flicked through the letters, a small, handwritten envelope caught his attention and his heart began to thump. “Oh, my god, it’s from my mother! This can’t be good. Let’s see”. Paul ripped open the envelope and recognizes his mother’s handwriting.
“To my dearest favorite son, Paul. I know you’re not ready to hear this, my dear, but facts are facts. I went to the doctor on Monday for my regular check up. You know how I’m faithful for my check ups, and I’ve had the same doctor for 25 years! When I went in on Monday, he did his regular exam and we found out that I have to have—are you sitting down, dear? A tumor removed and major spinal infusion. Now don’t get yourself all upset, it will be easily removed and then I probably, maybe, possibly, might, be paralyzed. Of course it’s a remote possibility, but I have to make plans just in case something does go wrong. Naturally, you were the first person I thought of.”
Paul read the note, put it down on the table, and then went to the cupboard and pulled out the whiskey and a very large glass.
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No offense intended to anyone.
http://mymindmappings.com/2024/10/08/fandangos-story-starter-170/
Limerick Time

Joe thought his mind was extra wise
Overthinking not compromised
Joe thought his ideas deep
But sadly they made no leap
To practical persons enterprise.
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Laughing Along With A Limerick
Simply Six Minutes

Here we see a happy place
No need for life’s busy race
I think it is the colors here
Promoting happiness, no fear
Homes all bright and cheery seen
Even the resting boats between
Have you ever seen or been
To a pleasant place that makes you grin
The vibrant shades of basic hues
However could you choose
A home to love, only one
And think you’re done?
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Simply 6 Minutes – Welcome to the Challenge:10/08/2024
MLMM Wordle


The aged man cracked a smile just thinking of the crime he would arrange. His wisdom in creating it was in question, but he decided to remedy his fate of a lifelong terrible marriage and started gathering a particular bunch of herbs. The victim, his wife, was extremely susceptible to the scents of lobelia, oleander, and licorice root, and the man covered these poisonous plants with a large flower bouquet. Over the course of a few warm days, the fan she used would distribute the toxic herb odors, and her vulnerable body would succumb to their effects. He removed the bouquet of plants that led to her demise, knowing the coroner would check her condition. Then he opened windows to let in fresh air before calling 911, and hoped his battle was over.
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MLMM Monday Wordle #393
OLWG –

This week’s prompts are:
- an old Patti Smith song
- need more blue in the shadows
- when I left El Paso
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When I left El Paso, I started to sing along
With “Wing”, an old Patti Smith song
“And if there’s one thing, could do for you, you’d be a wing in heaven blue”
The words were dreamlike, stirred up a memory
That I need more blue in the shadows of my sensory
I drove all night until I reached her in Colorado
Route I twenty five, my tired eyes dark hollow
And then I spied her, waiting-certainly in blue
We were on that wavelength
Just between us two.
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OLWG# 386- We Both Know
The Sunday Whirl

Scrub the crusty bones, a sense of pride
While the body did exist, now up and died
They’ll hollow out the marrow in the limbs now still
Before it vanishes into space
The body assured its will
For the soul below sent into stars above
And glitter in that place.
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Wordle 674
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