Can You Tell a Story in 54?

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To Jimmy, zoos were a wonderland. He hid his gerbil, Poo in his zip pocket. Jimmy’s dad’s aftershave hid any odor Poo might emit. Jimmy patted the pocket reassuring Poo he was okay. The trouble started when Poo squeezed out and ran up Jimmy’s arm. It startled another child who screamed like a banshee!

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8 thoughts on “Can You Tell a Story in 54?

    1. I started out and just rolled a story and it was quite involved and it was fun and then I checked the word count and it was already like 80+ words and trying to pair that all down to 54 was really difficult so it lost a lot. The last thing I was thinking of was poo and it squeezed out.🙂‍↕️

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