
We want to work with Implied Metaphor which does not explicitly state the comparison but explains it in a complex way as compared to a direct metaphor. It hints to the reader to allude to the deeper layer of meaning.
In syllabic poetry, it’s not suitable to use the word, “like” to introduce our metaphor. I used the word, like below, because of the syllable count. Sometimes, nothing else works. Besides, we’re practicing how to use implied metaphors.
Chose a syllabic poetry form from the list here and write a poem using at least one metaphor.
If this is your first time at Tanka Tuesday? Here is what you do:
- Think of a metaphor and use it in your syllabic poem.
- #TankaTuesday does not accept AI-generated poetry.
- Post your poem on your personal site/blog.
- Include a link back to TankaTuesday.com in your post.
- Copy the link of your published post into Mr. Linky. There are no recaps this year.
- Remember to click the small checkbox about data protection.
- Read and comment on some of your fellow poets’ work.
- Like and leave a comment below if you decide to do so.
- This challenge closes on Monday, 8/5 at noon EST, Detroit, USA.
- Have fun!
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roaring waters break
raging against barriers
seeking an ending
journeying roughshod along
established streams and rivers
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Tank Tuesday Poetry Challenge #23, 7/29/25: Metaphors
Thanks!
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Absolutely spot on Cheryl 💜💜💜
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The power of water so powerfully proclaimed, great use of metaphor Cheryl.
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This is wonderful, Cheryl! Your imagery is powerful!! 💜
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Thank you
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Great poem, Cheryl! I love the imagery!
Yvette M Calleiro 🙂
http://yvettemcalleiro.blogspot.com
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Thanks!
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How powerful you poem! I hope it is a story only💙
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Yes, it’s purely fictional. Thanks for reading it. 🙂
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Lovely use of the metaphor Cheryl
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Stunning imagery, Cheryl, and excellent use of metaphors.
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Thank you
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You’re welcome, Cheryl.
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Powerful and vivid imagery. I love your tanka.
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Thanks so much!
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This is a lovely poem and I love how you have include a metaphor and personification. Thank you for joining in 🌊
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Thanks for reading! I wasn’t sure if I did it right.
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It’s perfect 🌷🩵
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