

Charlie scuffed the sand to cover a crab walking along the water’s edge. It was early morning and every day he took a walk on the beach to clear his head from the last night’s dreams. Charlie admired the surfers in their wet suits to keep warm in the water while waiting for that next big wave. He had tried it but couldn’t stay up on the board and finally gave up.
Charlie’s life was like that. Try and fail repeating and his dreams reflected those thoughts. That is why he’s here, every morning, determined to try again. He wished he could fly carefree as the gulls did. But his own thoughts betrayed him, thinking, “I have no skills for flight or wings to skim the waves effortlessly, like the wind itself.” Charlie will try again and maybe this time – success.
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Prosery: Ada Limón
I love that try and try again attitude.
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I love his determination. Great prosery, Charlie!
Yvette M Calleiro 🙂
http://yvettemcalleiro.blogspot.com
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Atta Charlie. I’m rooting for him. And all young men. Thanks for telling me about him. Bless you.
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that is so good Cheryl! Charlie will get there in the end, try and you will succeed! ❤
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You just have to keep trying
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I enjoyed your Prosery, Cheryl, and you brought Charlie to life for me. I love the way you set the scene in the first paragraph, and made me cheer him on in the second one.
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Failure can be self-defeating for many and motivational for othes!
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YES! Perseverance is often the key!
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Good for Charlie! I think he’ll make it!
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Keep trying at least☺️
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Yes! 😊
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My money is on Charlie, especially with you supporting him! Nice Prosery!
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Thank you
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Nice one!
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