scurrying across pavement
escaping dew chill
lying beneath grassy frost
a little cold mist plays there
24 Seasons Syllabic Poetry Challenge, No. 6,Β 10/31/23: First FrostΒ (October 23rd β November 6) Soukou ιι
Tanka Tuesday
scurrying across pavement
escaping dew chill
lying beneath grassy frost
a little cold mist plays there
Hi Cheryl, this is very pretty despite it sending out such a cold message.
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The leaves definitely dance at our house! They must be thrilled to be free after being tied down all summer.
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It seems soβΊοΈ
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π
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Beautiful, Cheryl. π
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Beautiful lines, Cheryl. I can see the leaves dancing in the wind.
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Thank you
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You’re welcome, Cheryl.
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Cheryl, this is lovely and descriptive. I love “grassy frost.” I can see that in my mind.
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Thank you
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You’re welcome.
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I like the idea of the leaves dancing in the wind, escaping the dew chill.π
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Thank you. They are fun to watch as if theyβre alive
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great tanka! xo
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Thanks!
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