Another five minutes and she would be free. The midnight bus from Las Vegas had a stop a block from the club. By the time he knew she was missing, she’d be on her way to Colorado where she grew up. She had faith her family would accept her back home, but if not, she had saved enough strip dancing to get her own place. She eased back in the worn bus seat and tried to relax. She was on her way to a better life.
The Bag Lady 
Suspenseful! I felt like I was watching part of a movie—your writing is so visual 😊
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Thank you, I hope so
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she’s going to a better place!
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Oh I hope she gets away safely
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