
Prosery is the prompt where we write prose based on some given lines of poetry. This can be flash-fiction or creative non-fiction, but it cannot exceed 144 words in total (not including the title) and must not be poetry (no versification, line breaks, metre, etc.). Write a piece of flash fiction or other prose up of up to or exactly 144 words, including the given line from the poem: Charles Simic’s following lines of poetry:
“On this day without a date,
On a back street, dusky”. I met her in our special place, behind the five and dime where Marie was a cashier. Exactly at five-thirty every day but Sunday, Marie would take her break and I would take mine from the gas station where I worked. On Sunday we might have a picnic in the park or take in a movie at the bijou. But nothing compared to the secret rendezvous every day. The back alley was quiet and we enjoyed a few minutes of privacy, always starting with a long, sweet embrace.
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very, very sweet, Cheryl ❤
~David
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Thank you David
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A captivating story. A sweet tale of love at the five and dime!
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Thank you for reading,
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You are welcome.
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I would like to know more about your Marie and her “friend.”
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😉☺️
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Such a lovely story ❤️
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Thank you
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A sweet tender story.
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Well Cheryl all I can say is it’s a good job there are word restrictions, could have got a bit steamy – great write ❤️
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Oh, a lovely memory. I hope it ended well for them.
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That’s a sweet story, Cheryl. Everyone should have a special place where they can share a sweet embrace.
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Cheryl, your story is intimate and heartwarming. Very easy to visualize. P.S. I took the liberty of linking you up at Mr. Linky 🙂
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Thank you. Thought I had🙄
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You’re welcome. You must have linked up at the same time I did because then you were in there twice and I had to take one out. Maybe I should have been more patient 🙂
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Patience not my forte😂
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