
Remember your quadrille must be exactly 44 words, not counting the title and must include ice or a form of the word.
Icy Shoulder
You turn away and show your back
I suppose it’s what I lack
That causes you to turn away
All that disdain coming my way
Should have known
That feeling grown
Into a sad regretful time
Could not be fixed even in a rhyme
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What an emotional read! Great use of the word, ice.
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Thank you
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I think it is so very cool that you were in the Airfirce👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻❤️
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Thank you. It seems like ages ago. I served four years in Chapel Administration and office administration.
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👍🏻☺️
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And not cool that I can’t seem to type correctly on my phone keyboard any longer🙄🤪
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I can’t do anything from my iPhone for WP anymore. I’m relagated to the computer. LOL! So, I would say to did a great job.
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I could feel the chill of that icy shoulder….
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😃
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Really sad and really well written, Cheryl ❤
~David
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Thank you David
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Icy shoulder, nicely done! I should’ve thought of that in my poem!! it fits the theme.
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Thanks for reading
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Well written
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Thank you Sadje
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You’re most welcome
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I like the rhyme pattern in this piece. Lovely poem.
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Thanks very much
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great poem Cheryl! ❤
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Thank you!
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