autumn brings nature’s beauty of color
winter snow is white
colorful leaves drop and hover
icy gray hides black sights
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No idea if this is correct🙃
Poetry Form: Breaking up the Couple(t)
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autumn brings nature’s beauty of color
winter snow is white
colorful leaves drop and hover
icy gray hides black sights
***
No idea if this is correct🙃
Poetry Form: Breaking up the Couple(t)
Indeed each couplet has its contrast
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Contrasting second lines are good. Autumn’s colors versus winter’s icy grey and black.
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Great use of contrasts, Cheryl.
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Thanks, I wasn’t sure if it was right
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