


Woke up with an oof
Pillows punched ragged, not poofed
Could this be a spoof
From brother always a goof
May be but I have no proof
***
#TankaTuesday Poetry Challenge No. 59, Onomatopoeia in Poetry 04/07/2026



Woke up with an oof
Pillows punched ragged, not poofed
Could this be a spoof
From brother always a goof
May be but I have no proof
***
#TankaTuesday Poetry Challenge No. 59, Onomatopoeia in Poetry 04/07/2026
Cheryl, those brothers can be a real bother! ๐
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I like your clever use of onomatopoeia and rhyming ends, wonderful.
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Thank you Paul. Iโm not getting your posts. My internet is turning horrible but maybe you could be sure Iโm on your list for email.โบ๏ธ๐๐ป
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O dear, I hate it when that happens, had a bout of that last year! Thank you for persisting โค๏ธ
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Great poem, Cheryl! Love the rhyme!
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