

The box looked cool
Opened easily
I was no fool
Looked around suspiciously
Should I look inside
Do I dare?
I found this box, but won’t share where.
—
I glance around
No one’s looking
Think I’ll look inside, see what’s cooking
Then suddenly “it” pops out
“It” stares at me
Begins to shout,
“You have to keep me out!”
I found this box but won’t share where.
—
It was easy to see I was in trouble
“It” wanted out, on the double!
I took a minute and thought it out
“It” looked harmless, what was “It” about?
I let it escape, no problem arose, when you open a box, you just never know!
I found this box but won’t share where.
—
MTB: Boxing Clever to The Bop
What a great metaphor, Cheryl.
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Thanks!
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YW
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Be careful, Pandora is a trickster Cheryl… ✌🏼🫶🏼
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Always☺️
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I revised but guess I still didn’t get it right 🙄😵💫
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I just listened to the tape where Trump was recorded with a bunch of moronic media.guys. It was mentioned in the last trial day and if there’s anyone who is a bag of filth, it’s him. How anyone can think he is presidential material (again) boggles my mind. He’s a box that never should’ve been opened. Personally I think it’s scary. Scary for my granddaughters and my whole family.
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Well done, Cheryl!
I was trying to think of a response, but failed to satisfy the charter. Nevertheless…..
I read it in the newspaper
I saw it on TV
It was a picture of the humans
That I didn’t want to see
I found a box inside my head
Where I thought I’d rather be
It was a story of destruction
And of egos on the loose
A war without a hero
And with no sign of a truce
It was a tale of devastation
And starvation, child abuse
I found a box of revelation
With no sign of an excuse
I wondered of the culprit
And of how this came to be
Of the filthy over privileged
Of the selfish bourgeoisie
The I found a box to hide inside
To pretend it wasn’t me
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The box of “whatever”? 🙂 If so, may it be tiny, I’ll say. 🙂
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I really like this poem. It is lots of fun.
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Thanks!
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A perfect bop for curiosity unplugged! 😀
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Cheryl this is a modern Pandora story so well told…loved the seond stanza which left the reader wondering what was inside! and you made extra effort with some rhymes only…
for accuracy the Bop poetry style has none and the refrain is an exact repeat
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Thanks for the info!☺️
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I made the changes, thanks!
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great – its good to follow the guidelines though its not a hard and fast rule 😉
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I thought I did, I looked up the form in a different source and missed Colleen’s specific instructions-complicated
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Like Bjorn, I immediately thought of Pandora and her box. I like the way you evoked curiosity and stealth in the shortness of lines.
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Thank you
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Curisity can be dangerous… my mind went to Pandora.
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Thanks for reading!
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Well done Cheryl.
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Thank you
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So true…you never know.
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Thank you for stopping by
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Curiosity explored the box, nice one!!!
much 🤍love
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Thanks so much!
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Haha, nice one. 🙂
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Thanks!
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