Swirl around touching on the floor
Choosing perfect partners the key
Music soars, couple locked in sync
A waltz’s meaning so much more
Closeness of bodies now feels free
Dizzy head is a welcomed feel
Melody taken in as drink
Love begins as the dancers reel.
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Note: I used the phrases in italics as repeat theme but not sure that is the requirement
W3 Prompt #93: Wea’ve Written Weekly
The Bag Lady 
This feels like I am there, caught up in the dance.💃🏼
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Thanks!
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Cheryl, hi! 👋🏻
This week’s W3, hosted by our wonderful Sally, is now live:
https://skepticskaddish.com/2024/02/14/w3-prompt-94-weave-written-weekly/
Enjoy!
Much love,
David
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Thanks!
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*hug*
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The poem feels like dancing!
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I always feel like dancing😀
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Nice work with the form! I like the idea of the melody being fluid.
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This definitely has the rhythm of dancing. What song inspired you? (K)
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I love the old Strauss waltzed
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Yes, those are just right!
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Beautifully written
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Thank you Sadje
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You’re always welcome Cheryl
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Cheryl, I love how your imagery of <EM>”swirling around touching on the floor”</em> evokes a sense of fluidity… I think this is so lovely ❤
~David
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Thank you David!
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