- Your poetry writing invitation this week is to choose kigo words from a PAST season, OR work with the kigo words and phrases from the Early Cold challenge HERE.
- You choose the form, and you choose the past season, and the winter kigo words. You must use at least one kigo word in your poem.*
- *Remember, if you write a haibun or a haiku, the kigo word is required in the haiku.
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hawks soaring above
skirt evening thunderstorms
wind chimes sound warnings
the predator loops meadows
creatures scurry to burrows
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24 Seasons Syllabic Poetry Challenge, No. 17, 1/16/24, Part III: Early Cold (January 5 – 20) Shokan 小寒 – Poet’s Choice
Cheryl, this is nature in motion!
The imagery of hawks soaring above, the approach of evening thunderstorms, and the sounding wind chimes… I get such a sense of both grace and foreboding…
~David
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I’m happy you read it! Thanks!
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Great poem, Cheryl! I completely visualized it.
Yvette M Calleiro 🙂
http://yvettemcalleiro.blogspot.com
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Hello Cheryl. It’s good to see you back. Are you feeling better?
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Finally back to normal, whatever that is😀. Hope you get tho WP problems solved. All of their sickening, disgusting ads interspersed with our works is the worst, and they are certainly making money.
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Thank you!
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Just beautiful. ❤
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Lovely poem Cheryl
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I can tell you’ve watched the hawks. The skirting and the looping are great descriptors of their movements.
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I am a lover of birds
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Gorgeous Cheryl! ❤
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Thank you Carol!
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I really love all the action in this poem!!!
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Thanks!
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You are welcome!
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A great sese of tension created in these lines 🙌
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Thanks for reading!
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