The Sunday Whirl

Yearning to be surrounded by his presence, yet not wanting to seem too submissive, she decided to let go of feelings past. Her body was parched from the unending chill of his absence. She burned for the heat of only him. She thought he might be upset and ignore her call, but in the misty evening he met her. It seemed he was longing for her touch also. In the morning red of dawn they were found entwined.


2 thoughts on “The Sunday Whirl

  1. Your evocative description captures the deep yearning and desire between the two characters. The juxtaposition of their longing and the fear of being submissive adds complexity to the narrative. The imagery of the parched body and the unending chill effectively convey the absence they both feel. The misty evening setting creates a sense of anticipation and mystery. The resolution in the morning red of dawn brings a satisfying conclusion to their intertwining connection. Well done in crafting a passionate and engaging scene. ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ˜Š

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