Today, let’s write a haibun that references Mezza Luna, or half-moon, however you perceive it. For those new to haibun, the form consists of one to a few paragraphs of prose—usually written in the present tense—that evoke an experience and are often non-fictional/autobiographical. They may be preceded or followed by one or more haiku—nature-based, using a seasonal image—that complement without directly repeating what the prose stated.
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- Write a haibun that alludes to Mezza Luna, or half-moon.
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Writings based on phases of the moon intrigue as each one seems a story in its own. Might we ever conquer our curiosity and live in the moon’s atmosphere? Many books have been telling tales we will someday. Until then we stay curious about this satellite.
competing
still visible sun
shining stars
no wonder
its half-shape seems shy
peeking out
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http://dversepoets.com/2023/02/27/haibun-monday-2-27-23-mezza-luna/
A serene haiku scene, excellent! I do think a couple astronauts will be living on the moon in the next 5-10 years.
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I sit in the camp of staying curious, I wonder that that enables us to grow.
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Lovely little imagery in the end there. 💯
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Thanks,
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I agree that ‘writings based on phases of the moon intrigue as each one seems a story in its own’, with today’s haibun as excellent examples of that. I love the double haiku, with the shyness of the ‘still visible sun’.
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Thank you!
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Lovely
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Like the observation of how competes with the still visible sun. Excellent piece
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Thanks for stopping by
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Nice, Cheryl! ❤ lovely imagery!
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