Write a “blitz” poem that includes something about a mouse or mice. This form of poetry is a stream of short phrases and images with repetition and rapid flow
House Mice
mice hide
mice are clever
clever in homes
clever scavenging
scavenging crumbs
scavenging bits
bits of bread
bits of food
food spilled
food dropped
dropped and spied
dropped unaware
unaware they’re feeding mice
unaware of dropped enjoyment
enjoyment of a tiny mouse
enjoyment brought in tiny house
house in a wall
house hidden from cats
cats smell and sniff
cats only sneaking
sneaking is the mouse forte
sneaking silently every day
day turns to night
day isn’t his best
best to be hidden in the dark
best without candle scent
scent of savory
scent of sweet
sweet treat favorites
sweet crumbs he savors
savors flavors
savors sugar
sugar plums entice
sugar powdered delight
delight in all
delights inside cubby
cubby holes
cubby comfort
comfort and safety
comfort and rest
rest is not his job
rest doesn’t fill cheeks
cheeks furry
cheeks empty
empty shelves
empty floors
floors clean
empty
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Very clever, Cheryl! A fun read.
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Thanks!
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You’re quite welcome!
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Ommigosh, Cheryl! This is so good 🤩
~David
P.S. please don’t forget to share it through Mr. Linky! Here’s the link, which is also on the webpage of the prompt itself:
https://www.blenza.com/linkies/links.php?owner=b3n413x&postid=13Nov2022
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Clever.
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