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pine needle bedding,
sweet evening primrose’s scent,
soft ferns for pillows,
my vision of a garden,
perfect atmosphere to dream.
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https://dversepoets.com/2021/07/13/poetics-gardening/#like-22273
dVerse Poetics – Gardening Tanka
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pine needle bedding,
sweet evening primrose’s scent,
soft ferns for pillows,
my vision of a garden,
perfect atmosphere to dream.
I could do this, just move it inside, add air conditioning, a nice bed, and pine needle wax melt plugged into the grid, and I am totally there. 😉
This is a nice tanka, I think you will have better dreams
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Thanks for stopping by
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It was a pleasure. It was a little Gentle humor in my response, but it was directed at my own creature comfort’s. The truth is that your garden sounds like the perfect place for dreams
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Slumberlicious tanka Cheryl… 🙂
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Thanks, love that word!
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A garden should be a good place for sleeping.
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A garden is certainly a great place for dreaming 🙂
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This is a beautiful tanka … I can see / feel the lush garden, the pillow, pine needles. Sigh.
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Thanks for reading
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That’s a garden I’d love to be in.
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oh – so very nice – you had me with soft ferns for pillows…. i love ferns!!!
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Me too!
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How beautiful.
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Thank you
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This is so beautiful, but oh my word, I never thought needles would make me somehow nervous in this context lol. My mind is weird.
Such a lovely piece with beautiful imagery!
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Thank you
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I could deal with the pine needle bedding, but I suffer from serious fernophobia, so… uh, no thanks; I’ll go pillowless.
Tankariffic!
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Fernophobia? 😎. We had a piece of property in VT where the ferns were up to our chest and full, it was heavenly.
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I can sleep with those pleasant smells, pine needles and soft ferns are perfect.
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Lovely….so peaceful.
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Thanks!
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nicely done Sharyl! It sounds magnificent! ❤
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I could have quite a fine time in that kind of garden
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Throw in a hammock strung tree to tree and I am there. The last time I bedded in pine straw I came out with poison ivy something nasty. Ha.
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Sounds about right😄
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