Travels to Vermont
Sisters and families missed
A journey too far
Traveling not an option
Our fingers do the walking.
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https://wordcraftpoetry.com/2021/05/25/weekly-tanka-tuesday-poetry-challenge-no-227-themeprompt/
Travels to Vermont
Sisters and families missed
A journey too far
Traveling not an option
Our fingers do the walking.
***
https://wordcraftpoetry.com/2021/05/25/weekly-tanka-tuesday-poetry-challenge-no-227-themeprompt/
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Hello Cheryl, this is a lovely tanka. I wonder how many people remember what “our fingers do the walking” means. LOL! Remember not to capitalize the first letter of each line, in your tanka as that is the rule in Japanese poetry. Well done! ❤
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Thanks for the info!
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I’ve been telling everyone because I want you all to submit your poetry to literary journals. The more you know, the better chance you have of being published in a journal or magazine. ❤
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Oh yes! This pandemic is making simple things impossible. A trip, a shopping…., thankful for the online world.
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Me too😜
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I really like that last line. 🙂
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I was just thinking about that old tag line of letting your fingers do the walking and how the younger generations I’ll have no idea what that means. Nicely captured.
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🤠
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