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“So close that your sea rises with my heat” C.Perez ~ Love in a Time of Climate Change
Feeling overwhelmed by your presence
Timeless beauty standing forthright
Your stature unweathered by fools
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https://dversepoets.com/2021/01/26/poetics-beginning-at-the-end/#like-21250
You’ve continued the poem perfectly, and I especially love the final line!
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I love your lines Cheryl! It really does bring finality to the poem.
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It would be nice if true
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:>)
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Succinct, perfectly.
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Thanks for reading!
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So lovely!
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Thank you
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Three short lines and there’s so much in them! They’re like a continuation of the epigraph and an echo of Ozymandias too.
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Thanks!
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This is beautifully done! 💝
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Thanks for reading
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The epigraph you’ve chosen and the poem work so well together. They each enrich the other.
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Thank you
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