Drying curling leaves
Succumb to enrich the earth
On you spring roots feed
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Drying curling leaves
Succumb to enrich the earth
On you spring roots feed
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https://dversepoets.com/2020/11/19/mtb-jisei-japanese-death-poems/#like-20883
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So perfect! Took my breath away, thank you.
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Thanks for stopping by
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You captured the circle of life and death in your haiku, Cheryl.
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Thanks!
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So much said so briefly. Beautifully rendered!
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I appreciate that, thank you.
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A most welcome cycle.
note: Your link on the dVerse Linky is not working
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I fixed it for her. Thanks for the heads-up.
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Thank you much!
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Ok, Iโll try again. I donโt have much luck with it ๐ง
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Corrected, hope it works now
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In death, life. Nice one.
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Thanks for reading
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Lovely and very much in keeping with classic haiku. Just an fyi: I nearly missed reading this because the link I took from “Mr. Linky” said that the page wasn’t found.
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Thanks for the info
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I changed it and hopefully it works now๐
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Very remarkable poetry.
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Thanks for stopping by
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