
Be quick to see it
A bright yellow spiky bud
A delicious weed, enjoy
The gold soon turns to feathers
Floating lightly to reseed.

Colleen’s Weekly #Tanka Tuesday #Poetry Challenge No. 85, Hurry & Last, #SynonymsOnly

Be quick to see it
A bright yellow spiky bud
A delicious weed, enjoy
The gold soon turns to feathers
Floating lightly to reseed.

Colleen’s Weekly #Tanka Tuesday #Poetry Challenge No. 85, Hurry & Last, #SynonymsOnly
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Root out quick by spring,
summer they’ll be up again.
Rubbing under chin,
heart aglow with yellow wealth,
constancy of gold, itself.
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Thank you! I also like yours and always did the rub under the chin as a kid.
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A lovely tanka which tells a story. I love it! ❤
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Thanks again, C
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It confused my mind 😉
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Do tell….☺️
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Wow!
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This poem relaxed my mind.
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