This week’s challenge for #Tankatuesday is to create a dodoitsu. The syllabic scheme is 7-7-7-5, and we have to use these “kigo phrases”:
- #1: “early winter dusk”
- #2: “chilly north winds blow”
- #3: “warmth around the hearth”
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in the early winter dusk
even crows seek sheltered bows
snow drifted nests welcome them
chirps float in response
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chilly north winds blow loudly
collars turn up and scarves donned
bright fiery flames quiver
drafty fireplace
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furry creatures surround me
joining warmth around the hearth
hot toddies soothe my sore throat
companions’ love helps
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