
II. Shaun’s prompt guidelines
I’m generally a rhymer having long been a lyricist but do like experimentation too. In these busy times I’m also a fan of brevity. So for today’s prompt let’s try a poem that utilises internal rhyme where possible and keep the length between 8 and 16 lines.
Below is a helpful guide exploring different types of internal rhyme — feel free to use any (or several!) in your poem.
What is Internal Rhyme?
Internal rhyme is a rich poetic device that creates musicality within a line or across lines. Here are several types, with clear explanations and examples:
1. same-Line Internal Rhyme
Definition:
Rhyme occurs within a single line.
Example:
I went to town to buy a gown.
I took the car and it wasn’t far.
town / gown, car / far occur inside their own lines.
2. Middle-to-End Rhyme
Definition:
A word in the middle of the line rhymes with the end word.
3. Multi-Word / Compound Internal Rhyme
Example (Poe, “The Raven”):
Once upon a midnight dreary, while I pondered, weak and weary.
dreary (middle) → weary (end)
Definition:
A phrase or combination of syllables rhymes with another phrase or word.
Echo / Repetitive Rhyme
Definition:
Repeating similar sounds to create a musical echo (not necessarily exact rhyme).
Example:
The fair breeze blew, the white foam flew. — Coleridge
blew / flew echo each other.
5. Enclosed Internal Rhyme
Definition:
Two rhyming words frame a phrase within the same line.
Example:
The sound of the hound was all around.
sound / hound frame “of the”.
6. Chain Internal Rhyme
Definition:
A rhyme links across several lines, creating a chain.
Example:
He found the key beneath the tree,
The tree that grew by the sea,
The sea that roared with mystery.
Lkey → tree → sea → mystery
(rhyme echoes across lines)
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Jim was always slim, as he went to the gym, not on a whim – it was just “him”.
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W3 Prompt #185: Wea’ve Written Weekly
hi, Cheryl❣️
Just wanna let you know that this week’s W3, hosted by our beloved Ange, is now live:
https://skepticskaddish.com/2025/11/26/w3-prompt-187-weave-written-weekly/
Much love,
David
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hi, Cheryl❣️
Just wanna let you know that this week’s W3, hosted by our beloved Dennis, is now live:
https://skepticskaddish.com/2025/11/19/w3-prompt-186-weave-written-weekly/
Much love,
David
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hahaha! well done, Cheryl! ❤
~David
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Short and sweet!
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❤️
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Well done 👍🏼
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When Jim spent all his money for rent
to go to the gym, now a part of him
he got so thin and disappeared within
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Haha good one Cheryl! ❤
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