A bit much, said with a grin
Though you look lovely, touching her chin
Everyone will see what a beauty you are
They’ll be coming from near and far
She twirled around with her ruffles lifted
And he could see she was indeed gifted.
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Quadrille #231: Making Much of Poems
The Bag Lady 
I am pretty sure that he saw exactly what she intended him to see
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Yup
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I like a rhyming quadrille. I find them hard to manage.
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I hope he is a decent sort.
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Intriguing! I’m not quite sure how to take it–breezy or ominous?
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Very beautiful Quadrille!
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I hope he’s looking at her dancing, and NOT what’s under those ruffles. This poem could go dark, which just shows its versatility of language.
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I admit it was a little shady
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