ominous
baleful dark clouding
storm vision
–
foreboding presence
a storm’s menacing warning
gruff cloudy specter
thunder and lightning not far
creatures scurry at the sight
***
I chose to think of it as clouds.
SenHai Saturday #16
Senhai Saturday
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The Bag Lady 
I like your optimism Cheryl 💞
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Then don’t read my workshop post😄
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Lovely poetry Cheryl
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Wonderfully done, Cheryl!
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I loved how you personified the photo in the Senryu. “Gruff cloudy spectre.”, makes me think of an old grumpy grandfather.
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Thank you
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