Tanka Tuesday

We want to work with Implied Metaphor which does not explicitly state the comparison but explains it in a complex way as compared to a direct metaphor. It hints to the reader to allude to the deeper layer of meaning.

 In syllabic poetry, it’s not suitable to use the word, “like” to introduce our metaphor.  I used the word, like below, because of the syllable count. Sometimes, nothing else works. Besides, we’re practicing how to use implied metaphors. 

Chose a syllabic poetry form from the list here and write a poem using at least one metaphor.

If this is your first time at Tanka Tuesday? Here is what you do:

  • Think of a metaphor and use it in your syllabic poem.
  • #TankaTuesday does not accept AI-generated poetry.
  • Post your poem on your personal site/blog.
  • Include a link back to TankaTuesday.com in your post.
  • Copy the link of your published post into Mr. Linky. There are no recaps this year.
  • Remember to click the small checkbox about data protection.
  • Read and comment on some of your fellow poets’ work.
  • Like and leave a comment below if you decide to do so.
  • This challenge closes on Monday, 8/5 at noon EST, Detroit, USA.
  • Have fun!

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roaring waters break

raging against barriers

seeking an ending

journeying roughshod along

established streams and rivers

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Tank Tuesday Poetry Challenge #23, 7/29/25: Metaphors

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