

Pine Trees
-Chilled air seeping in
Windows only partly closed
Fresh, autumn, pine scents
Colder breezes send to me
Seasonal welcomed fragrance
-“to me a lush carpet of pine needles or spongy grass is more welcome than the most luxurious Persian carpet”. Helen Keller.
-Pine forests needed
Hardy character native
Needles, winter fare
Lovely pine trees offer scents
Citrusy, calming, cleansing.
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#TankaTuesday Poetry Challenge: Tanka Puenta, best and worst moments 10/01/2024 #syllabicpoetry
I could smell the pine trees! Splendid imagery, Cheryl.
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Thank you Colleen
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You transported me to a verdant place … thank you 💜
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I took a big breath in while reading your poem.🌲
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Beautiful scenario Cheryl
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This is very pretty, Cheryl. Thank you for joining.
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beautiful tanka Cheryl! ❤
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I remember Tito Puente. He set music behind Mambo and Cha Cha lyrics.
Love the Helen Keller quote.
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