

monsoon
season’s rain spate
earthworms digging deeper
flood and fires damage compete
summer
***
24 Seasons Syllabic Poetry Challenge, No. 44, 7/23/24, Part I, Sweltering Heat (July 22 – August 6) Taisho 大暑


monsoon
season’s rain spate
earthworms digging deeper
flood and fires damage compete
summer
***
24 Seasons Syllabic Poetry Challenge, No. 44, 7/23/24, Part I, Sweltering Heat (July 22 – August 6) Taisho 大暑
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This is terrific, Cheryl! Well written 🥰
~David
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Thanks!
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I like how you bookended your poem with kigo.
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The fires out west have been brutal, Cheryl. You capture the heat of summer so well!
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Thank you
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You’re so welcome.
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A thought provoking poem Cheryl beautifully done 💜
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Thanks for reading!
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A pleasure 💜
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Great poem, Cheryl! You definitely shared a different side of summer.
Yvette M Calleiro 🙂
http://yvettemcalleiro.blogspot.com
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Thanks! I’m not a beach person my skin won’t take it but I used to like collecting seashells and playing in the waves
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We don’t have many seashells in my area, but we do have plenty of waves. 🙂
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😂perfect
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👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼
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It’s not all blue skies and sandy beaches.
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😂
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