

I chose him, maybe he chose me
At first the darkness I didn’t see
Needed someone, he seemed to be free
I was in a place I didn’t want to be
I didn’t know it was temporary
Found he wasn’t where he should be.
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Quadrille #202: Hello Darkness


I chose him, maybe he chose me
At first the darkness I didn’t see
Needed someone, he seemed to be free
I was in a place I didn’t want to be
I didn’t know it was temporary
Found he wasn’t where he should be.
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Quadrille #202: Hello Darkness
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Experience is the only way, but nonetheless disappointing at the time.
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Some yes😂
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Good take on the prompt; often the darkness isn’t seen at first. Sounds like a lot was learned.
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Choices are maybe not even made… with darkness things just happens.
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True enough☺️
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I chose him, maybe he chose me… hard to tell sometimes, well done
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Thank you
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The hint of ambiguity works very well. I enjoyed your mono rhymes..
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Thanks!
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You are welcome.
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Very interesting take Cheryl
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Truthful🙂
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Awesome 👏🏼
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A familiar situation well captured, Cheryl.
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Thank you for stopping by
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Lovely construction
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I enjoyed your quadrille, thank you!
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Thanks for reading
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That’s great!
Might an extension sound like
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What will be will be, you’ll see
How about it? You and me?
Let us have a little spree
Where eyes are turned and love is free
A blanket underneath a tree
Our moment of insanity
So here I am on bended knee
Won’t you darling, hear my plea?
It’s off to Utah we shall flee
To practice some polygamy
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It was fun and I learned a lot
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Especially about myself
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I never examine myself too carefully, for fear of what I might learn.
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I know myself well at this age, but life does have some surprises still
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Great quadrille Cheryl! Well done, ❤
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Thank you
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