
Colleen’s hokku:
an empty attic
the sound of April showers
thunderous rumblings

This is my attempt at a new answer to your hokku, Colleen.
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24 Seasons Syllabic Poetry Challenge, No. 32, 4/30/24, Part II, Grain Rain (April 19 – May 4) Koku 穀雨

Colleen’s hokku:
an empty attic
the sound of April showers
thunderous rumblings

This is my attempt at a new answer to your hokku, Colleen.
***
24 Seasons Syllabic Poetry Challenge, No. 32, 4/30/24, Part II, Grain Rain (April 19 – May 4) Koku 穀雨
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A brilliant attempt Cheryl! Xo
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Thanks Carol
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Lovely poem Cheryl
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Thank you Sadje
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You are most welcome
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