
robin song chirping
wet spring leaves drip their answers
garden mums envy
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babies in nests chirp for breakfast
garden worms dive deep
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**I have no idea if this is in correct form
24 Seasons Syllabic Poetry Challenge, No. 32, 4/30/24, Part II, Grain Rain (April 19 – May 4) Koku 穀雨
I love your poem, Cheryl! Those birds will be hunting those fat worms every day now. Lol!
Yvette M Calleiro 🙂
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Your poem is lovely as usual☺️
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Aw, thank you, Cheryl! 🙂
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Thank you☺️
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Beautiful, Cheryl. Worms are getting real nervous now with the robins’ returns.
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😂
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Lovely Cheryl! ❤
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I wanted you to write the wakiku to my hokku, and then write a hokku for me to respond with my wakiku. But, you wrote a fabulous tanka. So no worries. 💖
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