
Shining waves caress
California spring seas
white foam ripples roll
stretches of chilled sand beaches
gulls dip close by, foraging
24 Seasons Syllabic Poetry Challenge, No. 26, 3/19/24, Part I, The Spring Equinox (March 20 – April 3) Shunbun 春分

24 Seasons Syllabic Poetry Challenge, No. 26, 3/19/24, Part I, The Spring Equinox (March 20 – April 3) Shunbun 春分
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Sounds absolutely lovely.
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Thank you
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Such a beautiful poem Cheryl! ❤
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Thank you Carol
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So much strength and peace
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i loved your verse and the glorious sound of the ocean in your video … Thank you 💜💜💜
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My granddaughter had a conference there. She was excited to see where she was born
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Cheryl, this is so lovely. I’m not a beach person, but I love how the kigo words added imagery to your poem.
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Thank you
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I love it, Cheryl! The beach is my favorite place to be.
Yvette M Calleiro 🙂
http://yvettemcalleiro.blogspot.com
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Thanks! Have fun on your trip☺️
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Thank you! 🙂
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A beautiful tanka
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Thank you Sadje
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You’re very welcome ☺️
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