
Poetry Prompt: Include AT LEAST ONE of these in your poem, from Pablo Neruda’s ‘Book of Questions’. [suggestion – regard these as rhetorical, i.e. self-reflective]. I like to use as an opening epigraph with nod to the author of course
• Why was I not born mysterious? • Why did I grow up without companions? • Do unshed tears wait in little lakes? • How long do others speak if we have already spoken? • Why does Spring once again offer its green clothes? • Isn’t it better never than late?
Poetry Style:
• Write your poem as a Ghazal*
• 5 -15 rhyming couplets
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“Do unshed tears wait in little lakes”
Streaming from a heart that aches sorrowful
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Flowing freely without sound
Shed tears disappear in lakes quiet
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Secretly letting the salty flow
Offered as a gift to keep and take saving
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The sorrow hovering inside
Set free from words I forsake depression
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Melancholy lessening then
Heart opens and awakes feelings lift
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Soothing now the tempest flow
Tears taken for my sake. relief
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**from Pablo Neruda’s ‘Book of Questions’
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MTB: Echoing Back
Your final couplet is my favorite! Well done.
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Thank you
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Wonderful Cheryl. 🙂✌🏼🫶🏼
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Thanks for reading!
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Beautiful Cheryl! xo
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Thank you Carol
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A poignant poem, Cheryl.
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A very poignant poem Cheryl
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Very nicely done. I liked these lines…
The sorrow hovering inside
Set free from words I forsake depression
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Thanks so much for reading!
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You are welcome.
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Beautiful expression of the journey of tears, the relief they provide when words may not come.
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I hoped the form was correct
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