
A magical new weekly writing opportunity from me – Jenne Gray – and him – C. E. Ayr.
Visit this blog every Friday, read an amazing story from each of us, and then post your own even better effort in the comments below. The rules are: Maximum of 250 words.
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They tried everything. Dreams were wavering as fate seemed to be deciding failure was going to be theirs. It looked good at first and being dreamers, they envisioned a unique hotel. Seemingly a huge docked ship, they thought decorating the interior in that fashion would be an eye catching success. As time ran on, money ran out and the idea dissipated into nothing. Now they are owners of the town’s largest eyesore.
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The Unicorn Challenge-09/02/24
But at least they’re owners. Think of the money they’re saving over having to rent!
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I think you missed the problem😂😂
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It’s by the sea, how could it not be charming?
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Good one!
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Amusing piece, but I’m surprised that some folk think this is ugly.
I find it charming.
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Oops. 😬
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Your designers would have perpetual migraine in the village where I live!
The old houses were built round the shape of whatever land was available, which makes for some odd buildings.
Now though, they’re digging out and flattening the land first, to build houses with right angles.
I like how you build your story up through the designers’ attempts to make the building obey their plans, right to the final defeat of the ‘eyesore’.
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Thanks☺️
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I’d stay there! Who cares if it’s ugly? I’ll be inside looking out!
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Great take C!
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