
Today, let’s embrace the day and the night. Let’s write haibun that include or references the Equinox.
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Autumn, being my favorite time of year, comes with a twenty-four hour gift,
such a long embrace
celebrate the equinox
advantage now played
autumn day and night longer
more time for the arms entwined
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Haibun Monday 9-25-23: Equinox
How wonderful to be able to love autumn like that.
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Growing up in the country in VT, it was impossible not to
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Oh, what an unexpected surprise – beautifully written. 🙂
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I was wondering about this until Frank mentioned tanka-prose: indeed a delight as was the content.
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Thank you for stopping by
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I like what you have done with this one.
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Thank you!
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You are welcome.
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Beautiful haibun Cheryl
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Thank you Sadje
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You’re most welcome
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Lovely. I love: more time for the arms entwined. 🙂
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Sounds good to me also☺️
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💖
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beautiful C! xo
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Thank you Carol
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A tanka-prose! What a delightful surprise! You eloquently capture the essence of Equinox in your tanka. Marvelously written!
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