Sijo Wednesday – Escape

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  • Three Lines
  • 14-16 syllables per line
  • A total of 44-46 syllables for the entire poem.
  • The first line of the Sijo usually sets the theme.
  • The second line elaborates on the first line.
  • The third line brings the poem matter to a close.

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An escape in the eighties, three excited children in tow
Everyday worries fell under Hawaii’s spell and pleasures
True escape from schedules, school, to mesmerize in sand and sea

http://ronovanwrites.com/2023/02/01/ronovan-writes-sijo-wednesday-poetry-challenge-47-use-escape-as-your-inspiration-this-week/