
I read your words
I fell in love
I heard your voice
I fell deeper
I felt your touch
I fell harder
I couldn’t help myself
I went to the edge
I let myself go
I fell freely
I fell without thought
I fell with conviction
I fell without constraints
You said you’d be waiting
You said dare to fly
You said I’d be safe
You said go to the edge
You said you’d catch me
We made promises
We trusted our feelings
We loved without boundaries
We went to the edge
We fulfilled our dream
We are one.
https://carrotranch.com/2018/01/25/january-25-flash-fiction-challenge/
The ending was surprising. I expected you to fall to your death and splatter your brains all over the pavement. Glad for the happy ending, though.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Hmm. Well who knows? That might happen in the end…
LikeLiked by 1 person
A beautiful poem and I especially like that it ended on a happy note. The kind of risk taking you write about is very difficult and it’s easy for it to end badly.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Well that is the hope ; )
LikeLike
A beautiful leap and intertwining of souls from the edge. It captures the spark of love an union.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you.
LikeLiked by 1 person
So lovely. Falling in love inexorably can be a giddy feeling indeed.
LikeLiked by 2 people
Wow indeed, this is brilliant 😳
LikeLiked by 2 people
Thank you!
LikeLiked by 2 people
Wow! You’re on fire, Lady!! xx
LikeLiked by 2 people