You wound me with your indiscretion
Offered to you as an openness with a private truth
Of you, and me.
I must have been under a magical spell when I spoke to you
Entreating your trust
I wound up being your regretful scapegoat instead.
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https://dversepoets.com/2021/05/17/whats-in-a-word/#like-21972
wow! Powerful poem here sharyl! ❤
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A clever omission of what I might consider to be the most obvious use of wound, but indeed, that is the poem itself – a wound reflected upon. Elegantly done.
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Thanks for reading!
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This is beautifully poignant!
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Thank you
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Clever poem, love it.
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Thank you
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My pleasure
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It’s so sad when we make the brave decision to trust somebody and they then betray that trust. Really the betrayer is the coward and the truthful person is courageous.
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How sad that this has to happen. Being a scrapegoat is no fun.
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Thanks for visiting
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Very nice!
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Thanks for reading!
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Sorry to hear she was harmed by someone she trusted.
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Scapegoating is not for the faint of heart …
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This is interesting as “wound up” has yet another connotation when used in this way! Fascinating.
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Thanks for reading
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I was going to say the same, I think this is the first time in the poems I’ve read that used it this way.
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I guess it is a phrase used by my folks I’m used to
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I’m familiar with it, I think it’s such a common turn of phrase that it didn’t come to me when thinking about using the word. Good job 😄
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It ranks right up there with Haired out🥴😀
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Nicely done
Happy Monday
Much💚love
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*sigh*
Beautifully penned, Cheryl.
❤
David
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Thanks much!
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Oh dear. Sounds like a relationship that did not have a very strong foundation to begin with. Being a scapegoat is definitely not fun nor is it a part of love.
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