Autumn leaves ready
Hues of pastel at the start
A gift of nature
Seen as a first suggestion
Later, a force of colors.
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Autumn leaves ready
Hues of pastel at the start
A gift of nature
Seen as a first suggestion
Later, a force of colors.
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I like the idea of nature forcing the most beautiful gift imaginable on us. Autumn may bring on cooler weather but this poem has warmed me up a treat 🙂
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I’m happy you liked it!
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I got here through the guidance of Mr. Linky, so your fix must have worked. 🙂 I liked your choice of synonyms.
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Thank you
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“a force of colors” – what an awesome way to describe autumn! A joy to read!
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Thanks so much!
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This is so beautiful! Excellent writing! I think you put the wrong URL in Mr. Linky. Remember, you want the URL of your post. It looks like this: https://rugby843.blog/2020/09/09/colleens-weekly-tanka-tuesday-poetry-challenge-9-8-20-vermont-autumn. ❤
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Oh, I followed someone’s advice and put a period instead of the forward slash🤪 That’s why I never used it. I just don’t get it write and the space is tiny to read easily.
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Just remember to only copy your URL and put it in Mr. Linky. No more advice from the peanut gallery. LOL! ❤
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😉😀
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Thank you. I copied the whole thing, hopefully I’ll get it right next time.
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You will. You might have to delete the previous link from the week before in Mr. Linky. Let me know if you need help and we can go over it together. ❤
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Okie dokie
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